Challenge 1 - Southside

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Re: Challenge 1 - Southside

Postby southside on Sat Aug 22, 2009 5:18 pm

Pops Ghostly wrote:whoa...my ears are ringing. haha...no seriously though, its obvious you guys know how to put a track together. Good job. Hilarious & fun lyrics...like the samples (the girl "heyy!") good times. I just didn't really like the beat. Mostly cuz it's just not my style...I would have liked to hear this track overtop of a fun up-beatish summer jam. I expected live instruments...cuz I think that was on your myspace.


yeah, we wanted that too just didn't quite get to it. We'll be playing a live version of this with the full band fer sure, though!
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Re: Challenge 1 - Southside

Postby TR Rhyme on Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:50 pm

I will admit, out of all the tracks in this challenge, this one sounds the most like a real track; a track that I would except to hear, and bump, on an album. A couple others could do it as well, but I would be able to tell they weren't quite there.

Basically, I want to give you guys props... and thanks for letting me know I need to level up when things get tighter ;)
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Re: Challenge 1 - Southside

Postby hipsterplease on Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:26 pm

:faill: OFFICIAL JUDGE COMMENTARY – Z.

EVALUATION OF YOUR CHALLENGE 1 TRACK

The instrumental: Full disclosure: Southside are already sort of a part of my extended Seattle family (a la Optimus Rhymes, The Goondocks, et al), so I am probably more familiar with their music than most. That being said, I can't help but notice that this backing track lacks a bit of the live instrumentation I've come to expect from them. Still, the wont of that particular earmark doesn't detract from the fact that the instrumental is shit hot, wholly appropriate to the subject matter and a ton of fun.

Timing: The difference between a solo cut and a posse or group effort is that its far easier for someone to drop a syllable and throw the whole damn thing off. Each of the Southside boys maintains throughout, and I'd dare say that this is one of their tightest arrangements to date.

Energy: The energy is high (pun intended) and, more importantly, infectious.

Emotion: Is drunk an emotion? Seriously, though, Southside is, more often than not, a party band, and this track makes you feel it.

Musicality: On point. Though I'm the first to lament a move away from the scarcely contained pandemonium of their Please Southside, Don't Hurt 'Em-era output, I'm also the first to admit that the more refined approach in this track has a much boarder appeal.

Creativeness: Just because you rap about drinkin', smokin', fightin' and fuckin' doesn't mean you can be sloppy with your wordplay, and Southside realize this. In fact, it's one of their greatest strengths.

Flow variety: The cadence varies from MC to MC, but you never get the feeling that someone is mixing shit up for the express purpose of spotlight-stealing – a pet peeve of mine. Well played, guys.

Vocal quality: There was an obvious shift in the mixing style between PSDHE and Liquors that I'm not sure I like, but "What We Rap About" manages to push the vocals to the forefront and keep 'em crisp.

Additional comments: Like I said, I love me some Southside, and while this song is another departure from the expected, that's sort of their thing. They keep you guessing.

EVALUATION OF YOUR MUSIC SITE UPDATES

First impression without having to scroll or click through anything: The official site highlights the band's live shows, which is a great jumping-off point, plus it blasted "ODD" on load, which shows balls. ;) The MySpace is branded for the new album, which is just good marketing.

Graphical attractiveness:From the logo to the choice of colors, Southside know how to brand their product. Clean, crisp and eye-catching.

Cohesiveness: Again, it all has "the Southside look."

Amount of content: The dot-com is a little light, but does offer up musical samples and give a feel for the fact that they're a live band. The MySpace is informative without being obnoxious.

Overall professionalism of the sites:Southside walks the line between approachable professionalism and a sort of garage punk aesthetic. It looks good without seeming pretentious.

Additional comments: Don't let the lyrics fool you, folks, Southside don't just rhyme about dicks. They also rap about quitting your job and cell phone etiquette.
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Re: Challenge 1 - Southside

Postby Dr.Awkward on Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:57 pm

OFFICIAL JUDGE COMMENTARY - DR. AWKWARD

EVALUATION OF YOUR CHALLENGE 1 TRACK

The instrumental: Love it. Very fun, very original

Timing: Timing was pretty tight, although the second verse had some problem spots but overall not too bad

Energy: The energy was there, this track makes me wanna jump up and awkwardly dance (alone of course)

Emotion: Not sure this track required any emotion other than lets have fun, and you guys captured it well

Musicality: Yes... you haz it

Creativeness: I love how creative you guys are. On the surface, you make it seem like a bunch of dick jokes, but there were all ball jokes, and shannon doherty!

Flow variety: Couple different flows, they didn't blow me away, but they fit the type of music you guys are doing, so it works

Vocal quality: Mixed well, Strong beat, just good stuff here.

Additional comments: I had the most fun with this track, it was a blast to listen to.
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Re: Challenge 1 - Southside

Postby 3rr0r on Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:57 pm

Off the bat, I really prefer it when people post lyrics.
A little electronic for my tastes, but still totally listenable. Minimalisting beats require consistantly solid flow to work, like this. I didn't love the scratching, but it wasn't too bad either. You guys sound like you'd be fun to see live, and this song would be a good set opener.
Website: Took me a few seconds to find the navigation links. Also didn't dig the auto-play, but hey, it gets you heard, which is the goal right? Artistically it looks pretty good. Flash is pretty... PRETTY ANNOYING *rimshot*. I noticed a distinct lack of t61 in places to find/buy your tunes (I'm a whore for that site).
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Re: Challenge 1 - Southside

Postby bazuukajoe on Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:33 pm

3rr0r wrote: I noticed a distinct lack of t61 in places to find/buy your tunes (I'm a whore for that site).

Me too! I'd let it have me if it wanted...
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